September Smooch

I suspect a different perspective of September would exist
Between Northern and Southern hemispheres
Like Aussies being down under when we really are on top

We've just come out of winter
We're all agog at the prospect
 of looming summer days
We are fully uplifted spring is in the step
While down north they're in a fall

It's nineteen sixty four my sixteenth birthday has just passed
Heady days of Beatles and other Mersey beat
We switch the wireless dial 
To listen to the latest songs

Birds are on the move, mating
Magpies gather dry sticks to build an untidy nest
Chirpy willy wagtails gather spider webs
To build the neatest nest I've seen

I'm living on a farm in a remote country area
There's a dance in a tiny country town
It's the September spring school holidays
I put on my black mohair jumper knitted by Grandma
I listen to Roy Orbison sing Pretty Woman whilst I dress

The excitement begins to build
It's an hour of travel to reach the dance
One of my friends father is the chauffeur
We arrive at the hall,  A lady plays old time dances on the piano

A young teenage girl is seated along a wall
She lives on a family farm a few miles up the road from our farm
I haven't seen her for several years as she attends a boarding school
She only comes home on school holidays
Later I discover she is a year younger than me

So we all have a dance, she now sits beside me
We have several more dances and still she sits beside me
There is only one small cafe in town
We agree to go for a walk and have a milk shake

I think we held hands on return from the cafe
We stop. In hindsight I think she has had some romantic experience
I am green. We share a long passionate kiss
Next day day I awaken smitten by this young woman

I recall just lying on the grass
Mooning for hours. Totally Love struck!!!!!
She returns to boarding school. I return to school

For all of that final term I lusted for the summer school holidays
She returns. She has a new boyfriend

A flashback to some years previous to our meeting at the dance
I was eight she was seven 
Local farmers and their wives would gather on Sundays at the local tennis court 
Games were informal whilst children played on swings and slides

I was behind the young woman on the slide
She fell and broke both her arms
Her mother believed I had pushed her
On the night at the dance my right arm was in plaster
A broken thumb from a fight with my brother

So I lick my wounds. Summer holidays are in full swing
There's a New Years Eve dance in our little local hall
A new girl is staying with her friend on a farm
We meet. We share an unhealthy common interest
We have to hide together to share a forbidden smoke

Every day I ride my bike ten kilometres to spend time with her
I leave well before sunset
I ride home without a light in bright moonlight
She is gone a week later
We begin writing letters to each other

I now spend many hours driving a tractor 
A plough is attached to till the land
I am remunerated by my father
The grand sum of one pound a day Australian currency

My friend brother and I travel standing on the open tray
Of my father's old Cheverolet tray truck
We try and harmonise the Beatles song She"s a Woman
The latch on the drivers door is broken 
My father has attached a rope to the tray 
He pokes the rope through the window of the door 
He then sits on the rope to keep the door shut

Cousins arrive, We play cricket in the paddock
We swim in the creek
We catch horses and ride in the bush
We bait a hook and catch a trout

There's a sports day on a rough arena near our home
All the locals gather to compete 
There's sprints, high and long jumps and wood chopping for the men
There's sack races, three legged races, and egg and spoon race as well
To end the day a mighty tug o' war

Whilst all these events were happening
Farmers wives gather in a booth
They make sandwiches and boil big kettles 
On an open fire to make tea

From September on we always looked forward
To six weeks of summer fun
All these holidays were great
Nineteen sixty four outshone them all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations to you on your winning work in Daniel's contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
bard Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Good day Sara Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my poem Thank you for your message blessings D😀uglas
Maverick Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 2:31 PM
God bless you Doug..And the fact our land was far away in the 60s 70s 80s They still managed to drag or push the Young men to war though..And so many were eager beleif in a just cause.! So much was avoidable.' I see why there was the charachter named daddy war-bucks in the musical Annie now, take care mate we need a strong Australia five kid familiys and balanced alpha men the same with women, the bedrock of any Nation.' All blessings mate.)
bard Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 6:26 PM
good day nice to hear from you again😊
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 10:27 PM
Sounds like an idealic time in 1964.❤️
bard Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 12:07 AM
Was a fun year 😍
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