September Morning

Humble deepening
Brown edging a delayed rush
The sunlight shifts calm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mcgovern Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Magnificent, love the way you bring words to life. I wish I had written this wonderful work.
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August 21, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Nice use of imagery in this creative view. I really like the last line. Keep on writing!!! Karen
Duhart Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Great Haiku..we will be there in a few weeks. Seasons do change. Great write.
Lopez Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 7:29 PM
This is a great write to the beginning of fall. very nice!
Chircop Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 2:38 PM
well penned,Beautiful September Morning--charma
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Soon it will be cool again. Excellent Haiku Laura. Thank you for you recent comments my friend. They are appreciated. Love,Carol
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