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September rains; springs spout, rivers fleetly flow to sea New memories commence as old ones laggardly fade away Septembers, one new daughter born; a father buried. Remember September Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Date wrote: 15th September 2022

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Date: 9/28/2022 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Terry. You have wonderfully expressed the ying and yang of life - joy and sadness, hope and grief. Wonderfully done. Blessings!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/2/2022 3:04:00 AM
Thank you, Sam
Date: 9/24/2022 2:10:00 PM
Terry, congrats on your win with this remembrance of the highs and lows in life ~ John
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/2/2022 3:04:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 9/24/2022 12:56:00 PM
i enjoyed this sijo, some nice alliteration in it, and a good last line - congrats on your contest win.:)
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/2/2022 3:05:00 AM
My first attempt at this form, thank you for your kind comments
Date: 9/24/2022 5:14:00 AM
Bittersweet memories of September, Congrats on your win Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/2/2022 3:05:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph
Date: 9/24/2022 4:14:00 AM
Terry, congratulations on your win in the contest. The tenderness of your imagery reflects the spectrum of the circle of life. :)Paulette
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/2/2022 3:06:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette.
Date: 9/23/2022 7:59:00 PM
bittersweetness. Great Sijo ending . congrats in my contest, Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/24/2022 12:28:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for your kind comments, the placement and for running the contest

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