Sepia Sky

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Heaven's rays warning
Ankle twisting shoreline's pain
Emerald motion~~~~

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 18, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Nice one ,Doris- on the road with urges of reading haiku. thanks P.D.
A  Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Enjoyed ! thank you.
Anderson Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Hey Doris, Thnx for reading and posting your kind comments on my piece....I truly appreciate it.I'm asking Audrey o post this comment on my behalf.....Jimmy
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:52 AM
I can see this. Sepia Skies have their beauty. Smiles, Dane Ann
Anderson Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Hey Doris, THanks for reading and commenting on my work...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me. ....Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 8:04 PM
Oh this is a very good one Doris. Good luck, Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 11:00 AM
wow, this is really creative, Doris. Is it for that picture challenge I heard about. I really need to go see that picture! LUv, andrea
Strand Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 1:33 AM
Nice work Doris.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Mckenzie Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Doris~ I love your Haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Contest winner..Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
Loveless Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM
this s pretty kick too, only, im not so sure i understand the last line. .:rain:.
Cheeseman Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 11:05 AM
What a beautiful colour you have painted thanks for all Daniel
Knop Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Lovely: "Emerald emotion!". Thank you for your comments...Gert
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