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Seperation

What seperates the old you from the new? Is it reaching a new level in life? Thinking what you want may not be so right? Is it going from poor to rich? Or when the roles are switched? How do you know when you've changed habits? Because some don't even know they have it. To some, the seperation is bad for the heart, To me, it's the beginning of a new start. SS

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Date: 5/20/2011 5:54:00 AM
Your poem brings to mine this Quote; "when I was a child, I thought as a child" Keep writing.
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:59:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Joya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:51:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your amazing creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv..
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:24:00 PM
I feel like you captured the process people go through when they first separate. I very much enjoyed it.
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