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Separation

SEPARATION Once in teen age in village, we two came too close. Swam on ardent urge surging in serenity. Days are gone bidding bye: Stars hidden in day sky. He proposed formally offering me red rose. Whelmed, enchanted, me fervent to give full consent. Pleased to meet my perfect guy and merrily chose. Life went on normal course parting us from each source. No romantic poem but to realize hard prose. Separation: Fate showed torrid reality. Stars hidden in day sky: Days are gone bidding bye. Memories left, joyous journey we had to close. 04/11/21 Second Place ' Abracadabra March Magic ' Contest by William Kekaula

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Hilo Poet

Date: 4/15/2021 2:48:00 AM

I knew that this poetic format would be a formidable challenge as many did not participate except for the brave few, such as yourself, Anisha, my compliments for your participation and placement, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/11/2021 11:24:00 AM

Anisha, not an easy form to write, you did it right. Good luck in William's contest.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/12/2021 9:48:00 PM

Thanks Eve. Love.