Anonomus Scorpio Poet Rhyme

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Separate spaces, United hearts

Sperate the spaces,
Tracking our traces
We're not ever far apart,
The finest composed 
Written with our prose
We'll sing slow songs of the heart

Feelings of freedom
Subset is seldom
Distancing, us from the start
Dissolve all the years
Bandage all our fears
Brought this harmony so smart

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Paige Hind November 25, 2024 at 1:25 PM Or maybe no? I just looked up that word It is a word! Sorry, my bad, lol. Sometimes you get moments of genius, lol. :) Anonomus Scorpio November 25, 2024 at 3:25 PM I appreciate greatly that you would even offer the constructive criticism. It means a lot to me! I thought it would be fun to be hopeful with just one word, given the context and restrictions to which this poems form has, it's required for the contest that.it is entered in. Smiling to you with reverence! A.S.

Paige Hind November 25, 2024 at 1:24 PM Lovely rhyming! I wanted to point out the first line "Sperate the spaces" - is the first word supposed to be spelled "separate" ? I just want you and others to see the very best- I love your writings, so real. <3