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Sentenced

they sentenced me to pay off your credit cards and back tax ring that bell they sentenced me to be subjected to grumpy not so special day they sentenced me to wish I didn't waste my time trying to be sweet they sentenced me to wonder about your motives it feels so phony they sentenced me to first take back my heart and then protect it from you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/5/2010 8:37:00 PM
Hey, good writes on a person that doesn't sound too deserving of you! I liked your comment you said about love of odd numbers. My numerology is 5 and 7. So I love that too!
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:00:00 AM
wonderful haiku .. smile thanks for the comment on my poem ...love Jayne
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Date: 9/30/2010 11:05:00 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Kristi. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 5:55:00 AM
Very unique way to get sentenced.
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:07:00 AM
Enjoyed the read but left me questioning. Nice piece well written.
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