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Sensuous Apparition

Sensuous apparition 
my lady in the dark night
this wonderful silhouette 
soft aim of adulation 
and timeless as it would seem. 
Fleeting moment of closeness 
becomes the stuff of my dreams.

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November 11, 2014
Form: Heptagonet
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place win
Contest: Silhouette of Light by nette onclaud

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/21/2014 9:13:00 PM Soft and romantic silhouette, Dr Ram...congrats to you!! Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 11/16/2014 5:04:00 PM Congratulation on your winning entry. The line "Fleeting moment of closeness" conjures up so many different possibilities as to keep the poem alive in the readers imagination. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/16/2014 2:20:00 PM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/16/2014 2:16:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/16/2014 9:59:00 AM Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win for your lovely mysterious poem. Sandra Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/15/2014 8:03:00 PM Your idea for this poem is wonderful and it is sure to be on the winner's list Dr. Ram. It is unique and gives the feeling of crossing the barriers of time. #7 Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/15/2014 5:40:00 PM oh, the mystery of it all, dr ram.. thank you for joining my contest and big congrats!.. hugggs Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/15/2014 7:41:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/15/2014 7:40:00 AM Congrats on the win Dr...huggs Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/11/2014 12:10:00 PM Nicely done Dr. Mehta. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/11/2014 11:06:00 AM beautifully penned with lovely imagery Dr Mehta good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 10:14:00 AM Your words are light and airy -- painting a lovely silhouette of love and dreams to come . . . nicely done! Login to Reply

Darlene Gifford Date: 11/11/2014 10:06:00 AM You captured it, Dr. Ram! A winner for sure. Exactly the stuff dreams are made of. Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/11/2014 9:51:00 AM You wrote this poem excellently for the theme and contest my dear friend Dr. Ram. I like it so much. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your kind approval on my sonnetina rispetto poem and my win. It means a lot to me 'cuz I'm thinking of putting simple melody for my students' song. Hope it will be a success, too. More blessings! Good luck always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply