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Sensuous Apparition

Sensuous apparition 
my lady in the dark night
this wonderful silhouette 
soft aim of adulation 
and timeless as it would seem. 
Fleeting moment of closeness 
becomes the stuff of my dreams.

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November 11, 2014
Form: Heptagonet
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place win
Contest: Silhouette of Light by nette onclaud

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 21, 2014 at 9:13 PM

Soft and romantic silhouette, Dr Ram...congrats to you!!

John Lawless

November 16, 2014 at 5:04 PM

Congratulation on your winning entry. The line "Fleeting moment of closeness" conjures up so many different possibilities as to keep the poem alive in the readers imagination.

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 16, 2014 at 2:20 PM

Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2014 at 2:16 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara

Sandra Haight

November 16, 2014 at 9:59 AM

Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win for your lovely mysterious poem. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

November 15, 2014 at 8:03 PM

Your idea for this poem is wonderful and it is sure to be on the winner's list Dr. Ram. It is unique and gives the feeling of crossing the barriers of time. #7

Nette Onclaud

November 15, 2014 at 5:40 PM

oh, the mystery of it all, dr ram.. thank you for joining my contest and big congrats!.. hugggs

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 7:41 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

November 15, 2014 at 7:40 AM

Congrats on the win Dr...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM

Nicely done Dr. Mehta. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

November 11, 2014 at 11:06 AM

beautifully penned with lovely imagery Dr Mehta good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

November 11, 2014 at 10:14 AM

Your words are light and airy -- painting a lovely silhouette of love and dreams to come . . . nicely done!

Darlene Gifford

November 11, 2014 at 10:06 AM

You captured it, Dr. Ram! A winner for sure. Exactly the stuff dreams are made of.

Len Gasun

November 11, 2014 at 9:51 AM

You wrote this poem excellently for the theme and contest my dear friend Dr. Ram. I like it so much. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your kind approval on my sonnetina rispetto poem and my win. It means a lot to me 'cuz I'm thinking of putting simple melody for my students' song. Hope it will be a success, too. More blessings! Good luck always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

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