Sensory Disfunction ( Naga-Uta )

Contradistinction
opposed quality and form
our eye's can fool us...

Contradiction speaks
opposed word choice inflection
our ear's can fool us...

Conventional truth
learned behavior mounts as,
our mind can fool us...

Indifference comes
vibratory energy
collective magnet...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 23, 2008 at 4:54 PM
What a creative use of words. Interesting use of personification. Wonderful reading! Karen
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September 9, 2008 at 10:43 AM
Just a great write Jay - You have a very fascinating mind and a remarkable gift of expressing it - God Bless Jay
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