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Teardrops that fall down Show sad sorrows of a man Sensitivity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 12/21/2010 11:37:00 PM
Hey, this one would have worked in that tear contest! NIce one, Phyllis. I see the three stars of haiku commented on this one. I miss them: Karen. rueben and raul. We just rarely see them! and now I will say goodnight! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 9:28:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Much said in just three lines. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/12/2009 3:32:00 AM
Nice haiku Phyllis, I love writing in this form myself...Raul
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