Senses.. I Blame U

I trusted you 
You was suppose to guide me
Instead you lead me to deciet 
You was naturally giving to me
Now what 
It was said when you stop working that four of your friends would help 
So I waited and.... nothing 
I still don't see
Hear only what you say
Taste only what you are giving me 
Smell only things in font of me
And feel numb
we are suppose to work together
Are you part of me but yet you rather not be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 21, 2009 at 10:20 AM
La'Shawn, this so terribly sad. What a shame. Excellent writing. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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