Sense Sends E-Mail

Good to best		
                                           finest sense shows		
                                               to be with that		
                                                 step by step		
		
                                                 Bad to worst		
                                                 ego's choice		
                                            Its disrespect falls		
                                                 in to the 'hell'		
		
                                               Just, for the best		
                                         through consciousness		
                                                   all the time 		
                                      Sense sends sensitive e-mail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 12:05 AM
Yes, sensitivity is a very important thing to have with ALL, friends and strangers alike!!
Devnath  Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Thanks my friend for your comment. bl
Wesley Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 6:56 PM
One step at a time will get us there bl. Hope my email does the trick! Luv, Lizzy
Devnath  Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Truthfully 99% true, 1% is not reserved, you too leave 100% to GOD, I know. Material nose Smells fragrance of flowers and many other things which can be smelt but......I have got a clue from you, truthfully I am saying. Really your E-mail was fantastic. Please, send another. You are master........ Thanks, bl
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:01 PM
I especially like the last line..Great work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Devnath  Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Hi my friend, you write in glorious ways, I feel myself there in. You are enlightened with acute senses and blessed, I feel truly,my friend, Thanks,bl
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