Sense My Thoughts

He listens with every moment his senses sense my thoughts
He turns my head from afar my world is his oyster
My words are driven by a force of his reading
My imagination is instructed by a passion that drives 
Magical lines written with the tips of my finger tips 
His want for verse is my pens glory 
Like a sip from the glass that lovers sip we bond 
We dance together in thought a daydream away
A meadow to sit and hold no regrets
Just a picture of a delight through our reflection
The sound of the passing stream filters our whispers 
The light sneaks away stars shine through past the moon
The deepest of friendship I hold inside 
In my heart he is close by myside
A truth from his knowing that most dont ever find
For this is my hearts desire a moment to fire
Two spirits attached forever in mind and body to soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/19/2010 9:44:00 AM
a wonderful variety of thoughts,brought well together,which was concluded very nicely.... :) ...peace , jay
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:03:00 AM
Love and sweet feelings are running wild in this beautiful wite...always enjoy your work..luv Michael
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:16:00 AM
You have penned passionate feelings of love in tranquility, sarah
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