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Sense - Lanterne

sense
smudging
wearing out
growing dimmer
grasp


6.30.17

confusionfaithfeelingslanterne

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James Marshall Goff

August 8, 2017 at 6:34 PM

Can describe the writing process at times...but you have grasped an intriguing poem here...good work, mf!

Moon Flower

August 13, 2017 at 11:23 AM

Thanks JM.

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2017 at 5:48 PM

Nicely done, Moon Flower. Let me see if some of your other new poems I have seen yet.

Moon Flower

August 2, 2017 at 11:56 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad to see your kind comments once again. :)

Silent One

July 20, 2017 at 5:49 AM

lovely... you have not written in such a long time..

Moon Flower

July 20, 2017 at 11:19 PM

Yeah, it's probably the lack of time due to undertakings in real life. Thanks for the kind words, SO!

Chris Green

June 30, 2017 at 12:26 PM

Very cool and one that makes the reader pause and think. Really nice Moon Flower

Moon Flower

June 30, 2017 at 8:32 PM

Thanks again for stopping by and for the kind comment, Chris. :)

Joseph May

June 30, 2017 at 10:53 AM

Wonderful Lanterne Moon Flower

Moon Flower

June 30, 2017 at 11:01 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Joseph. :)

Sense - Lanterne

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