Sense Feels the Picture

in mind's arena				
                                   seeing touching thinking plant 				
                                       sense feels the picture
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 4:44 PM
like this BL, the imagery of touch wow...
Devnath  Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Thanks a lot for your touching my poem with love and for uplifting comment, my lovely friend of always. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Where would we be without our glorious five senses,BL. The poet knows this best.
Devnath  Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Thanks my friend for your nice supporting comment. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:17 PM
- Fantastic .... yes, it is !! - Well done,bl my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend always. Your comment inspires to a lot always. Loved always, bl
Guzzi Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:20 AM
great fall morning here in August? BL which 2 lines are joined grammatically? haiku is objective sensory fact can you snap a picture of the content of your verse? Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:57 PM
My dear friend, grammar is different. If sense transforms in eyes, everything becomes clear. I feel so. Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:15 AM
great sense of awareness, bl... an endearing piece.. hugggs
Devnath  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
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