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Sense and Sensibility

We are commonly predisposed To lack of common sense - case closed! We seem to have it all and more and some, Well nourished and beyond, stern doctors say. Internet mis/informed by rule of thumb, Well travelled, read, yet so dumb in a way. So we still spit against the wind, chagrin! Try to impart wisdom to callow youth, Apply sunscreen to sunburned blistered skin, And prefer sweet lie to a bitter truth. We grocery shop hungry, total waste, As chips and cookies trump the shopping list, Tea mug left on the car roof in a haste, While car keys left inside, you got the gist. All through our younger years we binge and splash, Despite moms’ futile efforts to instil, By golden age we grasp it in a flash - A smidge too late but of our own free will. We analyse too oft what others think, Dissembling deftly that we barely care - Just keep your common sense and wit in sync - The rest will fall into place, fair and square. Last not least, togetherness is our strength, The rationale we stridently strive for, The rallying cry to our common wealth - Bad peace is by far better than good war. Humanity’s greatest lack, no offence, Is of much more and some of common sense.

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Date: 3/1/2024 6:51:00 AM
Dear Margarita, You eloquently highlight the paradox of human behavior, skillfully weaving together observations of our shortcomings with a touch of wit and wisdom. You show us that we must prioritize common sense amidst life's complexities, which is deeply felt. Your words urge us to embrace togetherness and strive for a world guided by reason and empathy. Loved it and hope you win. - Blessings, Daniel
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/1/2024 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, I’m glad it resonates. You must have an uncommon common sense :)

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