Sense

though night has fallen
i lay awake
staring at the ceiling
trying to figure out what is what
the dreams that come
they make no sense
switching from one to another
never stopping on a single thought
non-coherent imaes flash past
of random things that don't seem to last
will i ever make sense of them
or will i give up to let it win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:42 PM
why do i see this so much in my own thought at this time in my life thank you duncan
Palli Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Don't give up!
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