Sensation of Pain

my body trembles
my hands shake
it gets harder and harder to breath
with each breath that i take
sweat dripping down my body 
tears rolling down my eyes
i scream and scream
but get no reply
its finally over
my body is limb
"how do you feel baby?"
"can we do it again?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 5, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Welcome to PS, Monica! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing! Peace and love, Audrey
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December 4, 2009 at 8:24 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Monica. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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December 4, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Pain is not exactly the message I get from this very descriptive well written poem. Nice job.
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