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Sensation

Baby drink my juice and fill me with your sensation Oh, if only we could trade places And you could feel what I feel as this ecstasy races Through my veins. Passion. Passion. When we make love it travels fast and makes its way To the depths of my soul. Something incredible. I exult it. My hips rise to reach it They move toward it And away And the pleasure remains. Leaving my soul aching to feel your sensation Not a drop is wasted. I'll never run out of this overwhelming desire. To feel your fire. This want. This pleasure. I feed you and pray it gives you strength To give it to me. It is between my flower--your sensation, your butterfly, my desire, your beautiful creation--I drip sweet nectar on it for hours. This sensation. This invisible force. This magnificent emotion--it's ours we created. It's so dear to me, this ecstasy It travels through my fingertips into my heart--your art. It can't stop dancing to the songs of your sensation--to the rhythym of your motion. My body is in glee As it travels to my knees. Don't you know this passion is extraordinary? I don't wanna stop til it reaches the very top. The top is at my toes. That's where it starts to glow. We are magical. We are mystical. We are kaleidoscopic. Extrarrestrial. Cause what we create, is out of this world. It shines like the brightest diamond You'll ever know.

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Date: 6/16/2016 6:59:00 PM
Savannah, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/29/2014 12:46:00 PM
damn girl...very good!
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Date: 5/19/2014 6:26:00 PM
Ps., I had to return unto your beauty's sweet sensation, beautiful Savannah..Man you can look at this masterpiece in passion amid all kinds of different lights girl! I'm thinking poetry's right now; splashing your colourful creation's canvas: stimulating...Love, Jeremy....Pss., Don't give up the paint brush girl, You Rock !!*:*?(*{{...
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Date: 5/14/2014 6:15:00 PM
What a fantastic, exciting, sensual ride. I better go see if you always write like that.
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:43:00 PM
Savannah you rock the poetry world! Sensational!! My best, chuck
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:38:00 PM
Hi Savannah... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:41:00 PM
Its amazing how u painted this sensual potrait wit ur words, "this sensation,this invisible force" for me this is a classic.
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Date: 5/13/2014 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Savannah
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:32:00 PM
lol @ Earl's comment..too funny! This is an awesome write indeed...Enjoyed the thrill!!
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Date: 4/25/2014 12:30:00 PM
Hi Savanna, I'll have to go to church and confession after reading that.....but it was worth it... Keep up the great work.... Regards, Earl
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:13:00 AM
sensuous and warm... nice read
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Date: 4/24/2014 7:11:00 PM
sensational feeling...One can not get enough...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/24/2014 2:26:00 PM
Wow, Thinking There Are No Words Which Could Grasp To Express, This Ecstasy Of Your Love...Beautiful, And Welcome Such 'Passion Unto Her Loving's PoetrySoup....Love, Jeremy
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Date: 4/24/2014 1:49:00 PM
Better than diamonds, a new rock of love. I like your addiction. Stellar confidence. J.A.B.
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:31:00 PM
Cause what we creat,nice!
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Date: 4/23/2014 7:56:00 PM
sensational. good god, girl.
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