Sensation

Baby drink my juice and fill
me with your sensation
Oh, if only we could trade places
And you could feel what I feel
as this ecstasy races
Through my veins.
Passion.
Passion.
When we make love it travels fast
and makes its way
To the depths of my soul.
Something incredible.
I exult it.
My hips rise to reach it
They move toward it
And away
And the pleasure remains.
Leaving my soul aching
to feel your sensation
Not a drop is wasted.
I'll never run out of this overwhelming desire.
To feel your fire.
This want.
This pleasure.
I feed you and pray it gives you 
strength
To give it to me.
It is between my flower--your sensation, your butterfly, my desire, your beautiful creation--I
drip sweet nectar on it for hours.
This sensation.
This invisible force.
This magnificent emotion--it's ours
we created.
It's so dear to me,
this ecstasy
It travels through my fingertips
into my heart--your art.
It can't stop dancing 
to the songs of your sensation--to
the rhythym of your motion.
My body is in glee
As it travels to my knees.
Don't you know this passion is 
extraordinary?
I don't wanna stop
til it reaches the very top.
The top is at my toes.
That's where it starts to glow.
We are magical.
We are mystical.
We are kaleidoscopic.
Extrarrestrial.
Cause what we create,
is out of this world.
It shines like the brightest 
diamond
You'll ever know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Savannah, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Poor Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 12:46 PM
damn girl...very good!
Street Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Ps., I had to return unto your beauty's sweet sensation, beautiful Savannah..Man you can look at this masterpiece in passion amid all kinds of different lights girl! I'm thinking poetry's right now; splashing your colourful creation's canvas: stimulating...Love, Jeremy....Pss., Don't give up the paint brush girl, You Rock !!*:*?(*{{...
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 6:15 PM
What a fantastic, exciting, sensual ride. I better go see if you always write like that.
Melugin Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Savannah you rock the poetry world! Sensational!! My best, chuck
A   Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:38 PM
Hi Savannah... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Massy Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Its amazing how u painted this sensual potrait wit ur words, "this sensation,this invisible force" for me this is a classic.
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Savannah
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 2:32 PM
lol @ Earl's comment..too funny! This is an awesome write indeed...Enjoyed the thrill!!
Schumacker Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Hi Savanna, I'll have to go to church and confession after reading that.....but it was worth it... Keep up the great work.... Regards, Earl
Gregory Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:13 AM
sensuous and warm... nice read
Smith Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 7:11 PM
sensational feeling...One can not get enough...hugs Tim
Street Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Wow, Thinking There Are No Words Which Could Grasp To Express, This Ecstasy Of Your Love...Beautiful, And Welcome Such 'Passion Unto Her Loving's PoetrySoup....Love, Jeremy
Bordner Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Better than diamonds, a new rock of love. I like your addiction. Stellar confidence. J.A.B.
Thajudeen Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 8:31 PM
Cause what we creat,nice!
Miers Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:56 PM
sensational. good god, girl.
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