Senryu--Mama

you really listened
face to face or during calls
wish Heaven had phones


January 7, 2020
Contest Title: Senryu on Mother
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas
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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 8:22 PM
so poignant. I hope this made the winners' list. It's a winner for me!
Canerdy Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm glad it was a winner for YOU! Janice
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 7:20 AM
So heartfelt, Janice--I can see you talking to your Mom...superb ending line.
Canerdy Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 3:08 AM
aww you must miss her so much Janice, a very touching piece:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. Janice
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