Senryu Whopper

hands this far apart
                             the fisherman   tells a tale
                             of a missed putt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 2:48 PM
Nice one. I can picture it.
Knowlton Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Wow!…You are reading all my haiku/senryus. You`ve made my day Andrea, and I thank you.
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 11:22 AM
... I like it :) - Great written, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Knowlton Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Thank you Sunshine…Appreciate you reading and responding.
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 8:36 AM
lol made me smile a fisherman's tail or tale lol:-)
Knowlton Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Glad my poem made you smile Jan…Thanks for reading and your response.
Gauthier Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:02 AM
Good one, Charlie.
Knowlton Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:30 AM
Thank you line…I had fun with it.
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