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Senryu Waste Basket

my new haiku pad page after page of pre crumpled paper

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2020 4:34:00 PM

I have been surrounded by crumpled pages for a week; this one appeals to me in every way.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/27/2020 7:23:00 PM

I`ve been trying to force poems for the last few days and it just does`t work that way…It`s when I just let them come to me that seems to work. Again I thank you for reading my poems.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/15/2020 9:32:00 PM

Hahahahahaha! You are Mr. Efficient! Why spend time crumpling anyway! Great one, Charlie! Smiles, Gershon

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/16/2020 2:28:00 AM

Again, thank you Gershon. You`re one of the master poets in here and I appreciate you reading my poems.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2020 10:28:00 AM

another great job. You are so good with these short forms.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/15/2020 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Andrea…I enjoy writing them and so appreciate you reading and responding.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2020 4:05:00 PM

LOL senryu and haiku are so difficult to write when all those rules come into play. We definitely have to be in a specific frame of mind when writing in that form.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/14/2020 4:41:00 PM

Since there was no kigo, I went with senryu, even though it`s a haiku pad. Thank you for reading and your comment Line. You really have no idea how much I value you being a souper person.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/14/2020 3:12:00 PM

Funny!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/14/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking Kim.