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Senryu Not a Contest Senryu

Such deep sobbing
In my dream
Lost chances

introspectionsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2010 at 8:42 PM

Saying so much with so few words!

David Smalling

November 17, 2010 at 5:32 PM

I feel the weight of this sadness ... because the poem does excellently its work. Well done

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 21, 2010 at 4:37 AM

so much sadness and regret in these lines, Linda-- I think you did wonderfully in conveying it-- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 20, 2010 at 8:57 AM

Hello there Linda !! What a wonderful and fascinating enjoyment to read this wonderful poem. (( many sad thoughts go thru my mind while reading this awesome and clever write. Enjoy and take care,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

September 15, 2010 at 5:44 PM

enjoyed reading today! even though sounds like a bad dream I was having last saturday!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 15, 2010 at 1:39 PM

Nice piece but sad Linda...an emotional write ... cannot change the past so look toward a positive bright future luv.. enjoyed..

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 15, 2010 at 10:09 AM

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Linda. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

September 15, 2010 at 8:14 AM

There are many of us who regret lost opportunities, Linda. I'm sure a lot of people will relate to this one. Hope you're not really feeling down now, dear. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2010 at 10:08 PM

I really like this, Linda! luv, Andrea

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