An extended version of my "Sentry for Sadness" from the contest "Senryu for Sadness " by Laura Loo.
Ecstasy gone Sun fades, embracing darkness, Cradling the madness Rope on demijohn Clotted narcotic crassness The chimney warmth, gone The abandoned skin Thoughts dressed in nothingness Eternally gone
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