Senryu For Sadness Extended
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An extended version of my "Sentry for Sadness" from the contest "Senryu for Sadness " by Laura Loo.
Ecstasy gone
Sun fades, embracing darkness,
Cradling the madness
Rope on demijohn
Clotted narcotic crassness
The chimney warmth, gone
The abandoned skin
Thoughts dressed in nothingness
Eternally gone
Copyright © G. Jay | Year Posted 2017
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