Senryu For Sadness

Mourning wolfed down whole
Forbidden hurt howls inside-
Hidden grief tongue-tied



02/O9/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Your projection of sadness has been ably done, Aqua. Many are those who suffer on the inside, without betraying outward emotions. ~ Warm regards // paul
Marine Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 12:48 AM
My Mum was nit allowed to mourn the death of her firstborn prem twin boys - after a week of sobbing her heart out- she was told it was enough, and she must stop crying. She hasn't been able to cry since. 'Its for the best." is most probably the worst thing anyone can say to someone about a miscarriage, a failed relationship, the death of a pet...I only understood what she went through after reading an article on "hidden grief"- grief you cant speak about, or receive comfort for, because its frowned on. We need to support and comfort where we can. Thank you for your visit and comment, Paul!
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Powerful, AM. Well penned.
Marine Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 1:57 PM
It's not often that a fellow poet comes by to comment on older works, Line! Very much appreciated indeed...Thoughtful and kind of you to visit this personal senryu. : )
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations Aqua :)
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:54 AM
- Congratulations Aqua, on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marine Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:57 AM
I thought I had replied to you, Sunshine Smile, so here's a Big Thank You, for your comment! :-)
Capitano Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Well crafted A.M.; love the tongue-tied grief. Good luck in the contest.
Marine Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Phil, getting grief "off one's chest " is a natural part of grieving, and needs to be understood, and accepted with compassion...your visit and comment means a lot to me :-)
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