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Senryu For Sadness

Mourning wolfed down whole
Forbidden hurt howls inside-
Hidden grief tongue-tied



02/O9/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2019 4:16:00 PM

Your projection of sadness has been ably done, Aqua. Many are those who suffer on the inside, without betraying outward emotions. ~ Warm regards // paul

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/1/2019 12:48:00 AM

My Mum was nit allowed to mourn the death of her firstborn prem twin boys - after a week of sobbing her heart out- she was told it was enough, and she must stop crying. She hasn't been able to cry since. 'Its for the best." is most probably the worst thing anyone can say to someone about a miscarriage, a failed relationship, the death of a pet...I only understood what she went through after reading an article on "hidden grief"- grief you cant speak about, or receive comfort for, because its frowned on. We need to support and comfort where we can. Thank you for your visit and comment, Paul!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2019 10:11:00 PM

Powerful, AM. Well penned.

Aqua Marine
Date: 5/12/2019 1:57:00 PM

It's not often that a fellow poet comes by to comment on older works, Line! Very much appreciated indeed...Thoughtful and kind of you to visit this personal senryu. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/3/2017 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations Aqua :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2017 11:54:00 AM

- Congratulations Aqua, on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/28/2017 7:57:00 AM

I thought I had replied to you, Sunshine Smile, so here's a Big Thank You, for your comment! :-)

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/2/2017 6:04:00 AM

Well crafted A.M.; love the tongue-tied grief. Good luck in the contest.

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/2/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Phil, getting grief "off one's chest " is a natural part of grieving, and needs to be understood, and accepted with compassion...your visit and comment means a lot to me :-)

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