Charmane Bellen Poet Senryu

Senryu: Feelings

If my heart smile
precious gems appear
in the cheeks

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dart pierced my heart
butterflies swarming
invades my system

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shattered in pieces
my heart
like broken glass


2015-08-27

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Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2015 at 5:58 PM cute KU! My favorite was the first one. It was quite original. and the middle one great imagery in that middle line. Charmane Bellen September 15, 2015 at 8:17 PM right now those gems are on my cheeks! thank you all for appreciating my words..~hugs~charmane

Jan Allison August 28, 2015 at 12:11 PM such an emotional trio of senryu:-) hugs Jan xx Charmane Bellen August 28, 2015 at 12:45 PM yeah it's a relief writing what you feel :D..thanks Jan for the visit!

Emile Pinet August 28, 2015 at 9:37 AM Your creative thoughts encompass the soul of a poet and bring to life the experience for others to savor and enjoy. Emile. Charmane Bellen August 28, 2015 at 12:28 PM thank you Emile for such beautiful words..glad you enjoy it :D