Home » Poems » Charlie Knowlton » Senryu Carp Diem

Senryu Carp Diem

bug eyed and no place
                                 to hide    my naked goldfish
                                 acting koi

feelingsfishnaturesenryu

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kim Rodrigues

March 30, 2020 at 9:32 PM

Another cute one! A little laugh...we need!

Charlie Knowlton

March 30, 2020 at 9:37 PM

I try…Love to make people laugh. Thank you Kim.

Panagiota Romios

March 30, 2020 at 11:02 AM

An astonishgly great write, Chalie! Have a happy day! Rainbow wishes, Panagiota

Charlie Knowlton

March 30, 2020 at 12:48 PM

Thank you Panagiota, for reading, liking and your comment. It`s greatly appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

March 27, 2020 at 4:26 PM

"acting koi" - frankly Charlie, this was blooming brilliant!

Charlie Knowlton

March 27, 2020 at 7:10 PM

You`re too kind Caren…Hope you enjoyed and thank you for the feedback.

Gershon Wolf

March 24, 2020 at 10:38 AM

Put any coral in with that goldfish yet, Charlie? (--if he's not a goner already)… P.S. I miss your clever writes. Hope you're well!! Take care, Gershon

Charlie Knowlton

March 24, 2020 at 10:59 AM

I`m always good Gershon, and hope you are as well. Thanks for reading my poem and responding. I`m happy to put a smile on your face and very much value your feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2020 at 2:02 PM

omg, this is so good. Was it in the gift contest? I adore that last line.

Charlie Knowlton

March 15, 2020 at 3:39 PM

I wasn`t aware of the gift contest. Just had this thought and wrote a silly poem…Glad you liked Andrea, and once again, thank you for reading and feedback.