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Senryu Carp Diem

bug eyed and no place
                                 to hide    my naked goldfish
                                 acting koi

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/30/2020 9:32:00 PM

Another cute one! A little laugh...we need!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/30/2020 9:37:00 PM

I try…Love to make people laugh. Thank you Kim.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/30/2020 11:02:00 AM

An astonishgly great write, Chalie! Have a happy day! Rainbow wishes, Panagiota

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/30/2020 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota, for reading, liking and your comment. It`s greatly appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2020 4:26:00 PM

"acting koi" - frankly Charlie, this was blooming brilliant!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/27/2020 7:10:00 PM

You`re too kind Caren…Hope you enjoyed and thank you for the feedback.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/24/2020 10:38:00 AM

Put any coral in with that goldfish yet, Charlie? (--if he's not a goner already)… P.S. I miss your clever writes. Hope you're well!! Take care, Gershon

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/24/2020 10:59:00 AM

I`m always good Gershon, and hope you are as well. Thanks for reading my poem and responding. I`m happy to put a smile on your face and very much value your feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2020 2:02:00 PM

omg, this is so good. Was it in the gift contest? I adore that last line.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/15/2020 3:39:00 PM

I wasn`t aware of the gift contest. Just had this thought and wrote a silly poem…Glad you liked Andrea, and once again, thank you for reading and feedback.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2020 2:22:00 PM

Hahaha! Sooooooo clever. Love all the wordplay, Charlie! :) gw

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/11/2020 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Gershon…Glad you enjoy and I much appreciate the feedback.