Senryu and a Thought

Senryu
Witness a star die
A sparkle across night sky 
A shroud of nebulous 


Thought

Surveillance society 
The obedient has nothing to fear
….For now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 6, 2013 at 11:08 PM
jan, a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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July 7, 2013 at 5:38 AM
thank you Poet Destroyer
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June 20, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Hi - That word "obedient" gives me the willies. love Katrhy
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June 20, 2013 at 2:09 PM
obedient thank youdear
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June 19, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Quite true! Especially your "thought"...nicely done!
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June 19, 2013 at 5:01 PM
thank you Drake Eszes
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