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Senryu and a Thought

Senryu Witness a star die A sparkle across night sky A shroud of nebulous Thought Surveillance society The obedient has nothing to fear ….For now.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:08:00 PM

jan, a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/7/2013 5:38:00 AM

thank you Poet Destroyer

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/20/2013 5:19:00 AM

Hi - That word "obedient" gives me the willies. love Katrhy

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/20/2013 2:09:00 PM

obedient thank youdear

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/19/2013 7:34:00 AM

Quite true! Especially your "thought"...nicely done!

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/19/2013 5:01:00 PM

thank you Drake Eszes