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Senryu and a Thought

Senryu Witness a star die A sparkle across night sky A shroud of nebulous Thought Surveillance society The obedient has nothing to fear ….For now.

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Date: 7/6/2013 11:08:00 PM
jan, a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/7/2013 5:38:00 AM
thank you Poet Destroyer
Date: 6/20/2013 5:19:00 AM
Hi - That word "obedient" gives me the willies. love Katrhy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/20/2013 2:09:00 PM
obedient thank youdear
Date: 6/19/2013 7:34:00 AM
Quite true! Especially your "thought"...nicely done!
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/19/2013 5:01:00 PM
thank you Drake Eszes

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