Senryu 8 - Lost

tears falling like rain
                                             grieving for lost innocence
                                                   never to be found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Croft Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 5:37 PM
very sad. thank you for your comments on my work
Horsman Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 5:34 AM
so profound Kim, love this
Sivey Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Wow, what a powerful write this one is! This is an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
Grisetti Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 6:04 PM
A sensitive senryu, enjoyed reading it tonight.
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