Senryu

blazing sunrise
our turn to act as fools…
    slumbering moths

      ~29 Jan 2016~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 2:29 PM
And there are repercussions for human fools, David! #7 Very creative. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:47 PM
you are so good at these!
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:07 PM
lovely senryu David :-) hugs Jan xx
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