Jan Oskar Hansen Poet Haiku

Senryu

Senryu 

As sun pales 
The old town looks haggard 
Till dawn 


Senryu 
Streetlamps sadly knows
They only play stand-in roles   
The sun is the star. 

Senryu 
When sun takes a break 
Crossly hides behind a cloud 
The day is murky

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Kathryn Collins March 1, 2013 at 1:38 PM Don't even bring up judges (yes I know you didn't). I am soured on them.

Kathryn Collins March 1, 2013 at 9:22 AM I love those words streelamps "they only play stand-in roles". Save them and use them again some place. I'll be waiting. love, Kathy Jan Oskar Hansen March 1, 2013 at 10:42 AM thank you Katy, i once danced under a streetlight it was my limelight and I was arrested