Senryu

Coy lips sipping wine
Converse words of sweet nothing –
Later, flows pleasure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Nicely done senryu: the sipping and the flowing.
Farmer Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Thank you Joann
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