Senryu

sharp words sword of two edges… to and fro ~//~

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John Freeman

Date: 1/22/2011 10:01:00 PM

Excellent Senyru, Cuts both ways, Sharp likes God's word. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2010 5:29:00 PM

ahhhh yes! hack saws gapped teeth/chews the marrow ancient oak...lumberjack screams Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:44:00 PM

Such words cut and can tear our hearts in two, Charles. Wisdom born of experience is revealed in this strong senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/9/2010 1:10:00 PM

Yes, cewtain words are like two edges of the sword, Charles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2010 12:21:00 PM

That would hurt for sure..Glad that I read this one this afternoon..Sara