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Senryu

sharp words sword of two edges… to and fro ~//~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/22/2011 10:01:00 PM
Excellent Senyru, Cuts both ways, Sharp likes God's word. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:29:00 PM
ahhhh yes! hack saws gapped teeth/chews the marrow ancient oak...lumberjack screams Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2010 12:44:00 PM
Such words cut and can tear our hearts in two, Charles. Wisdom born of experience is revealed in this strong senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 1:10:00 PM
Yes, cewtain words are like two edges of the sword, Charles
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Date: 12/9/2010 12:21:00 PM
That would hurt for sure..Glad that I read this one this afternoon..Sara
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