Senryu

sharp words sword of two edges… to and fro ~//~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Excellent Senyru, Cuts both ways, Sharp likes God's word. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:29 PM
ahhhh yes! hack saws gapped teeth/chews the marrow ancient oak...lumberjack screams Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Such words cut and can tear our hearts in two, Charles. Wisdom born of experience is revealed in this strong senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Yes, cewtain words are like two edges of the sword, Charles
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 12:21 PM
That would hurt for sure..Glad that I read this one this afternoon..Sara
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