Senryu

Lost love,
how critical,
sixth grade love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:30 PM
A nice Senryu with nice images.
Henderson Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Very good cut, John and just nine syllables. You did good. I try to stay close to the 5,7,5 but I do enjoy shorter, such as this. Charles
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August 16, 2010 at 9:25 AM
funny senryu...sixth grade love...
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