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Senryu

Lost love, how critical, sixth grade love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 6:30:00 PM
A nice Senryu with nice images.
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Date: 8/16/2010 12:02:00 PM
Very good cut, John and just nine syllables. You did good. I try to stay close to the 5,7,5 but I do enjoy shorter, such as this. Charles
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:25:00 AM
funny senryu...sixth grade love...
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