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Senryu 1- Wiggle

sardines in a can ---
                                                passengers on an airplane
                                                      no room to wiggle

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2011

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December 18, 2011 at 7:56 PM

Boy I can relate to the lack of wiggle room on today's planes. Felt like a sardine :) Nice one Kim

December 5, 2011 at 12:46 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative Senryu..Sara

Black Eyed Susan

December 5, 2011 at 7:20 AM

especially if you're fat! (no offense meant) very clever senryu!

December 4, 2011 at 11:20 PM

hehe, this is quite a cute way of putting it Kim.. Thanks for the smiles this morning ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2011 at 4:14 PM

Good comparison senryu , Kim. I hate a plane like this!

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