Senryu 1

the moonlights for you
not going anywhere 
the morning after
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:31 PM
awesome
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 5:04 AM
Great write and congrats on the fine win, Baby
A  Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Baby, CONGRATULATIONS, I had fun reading this... I posted a few fun pictures, on my latest blog, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=20799&PoetID=17922 Enjoy and stop by if you like. Love ~SKAT~
Austin Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Dey be more than moonlight. De be booze too maybe. Good stuff. Congrats. daver
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January 14, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Hello Baby J., well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 13, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Jay, lovely haiku. perfect imagery. Welcome to poetry soup. SKAT
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