Senryu 1

the moonlights for you not going anywhere the morning after

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:31:00 PM

awesome

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2014 5:04:00 AM

Great write and congrats on the fine win, Baby

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2014 12:14:00 AM

Baby, CONGRATULATIONS, I had fun reading this... I posted a few fun pictures, on my latest blog, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=20799&PoetID=17922 Enjoy and stop by if you like. Love ~SKAT~

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2014 3:34:00 PM

Dey be more than moonlight. De be booze too maybe. Good stuff. Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 8:21:00 AM

Hello Baby J., well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2014 6:03:00 PM

Jay, lovely haiku. perfect imagery. Welcome to poetry soup. SKAT