Senryu 14

Turn computer on Tingling feeling, just a fizz Where your Navel is Gene Bourne 06-01-14 .

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/4/2020 10:57:00 AM

More of a Senryu than a haiku, same structure different muse. Nice work

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 3:56:00 PM

They are easy, the senryu are like haiku, but on the physical side... not nature... look it up Gene,... then tap my shoulder when you have one... :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 10:23:00 AM

hey Gene, don't worry about me, I have no new post... However, thank you for the reply, and I sure enjoyed the haiku or free verse. Whichever you wish to call it. How about a senryu... :) Linda

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/9/2014 10:34:00 AM

Hey.....You're on. I'll message you as soon as I look up the definition and attempt one. ....YF...Gene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:24:00 AM

ha, I like this Gene, the tingling feeling... enjoyed..Linda

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/9/2014 10:22:00 AM

My mistake...I was thinking we were on "Buddy Mine", not "Haiku 7". That's what I get for pulling an all-nighter. ....I'm fuzzy headed, this morning. ....YF....Gene.

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/9/2014 10:18:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. As I noted, this is the last Haiku-metered stanzas of a longer, 23 stanza poem...Now that I have more free time....I have a lot of catching up to do in reading and commenting. with friends like you. ....Your PS friend ....Gene