Senryu 1-25-2017

SENRYU 1/25/2017


THREE SLICES OF BREAD
ABSENTLY TOSSED ON THE GRASS
MANNA FROM HEAVEN


John G. Lawless
1/25/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Love this .It would be manna indeed for a homeless starving soul!
Lawless Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:09 AM
...yeah...and the "bread" comes in so many possibilities ...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:35 AM
So much can be read into this one! Nice!
Lawless Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:07 AM
a bit of vague word play on .... "cast your bread upon the waters".....
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Only if Manna works at Heavens Deli...
Lawless Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 9:22 PM
innumerable sparrows, five blue jays, a dove, and a scrawny squirrel thanked heaven for the gift...
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