Senryu 11-20-2016

Senryu 11/20/2016

old pottery jugs
cracking with the weight of age
silently weeping


John G. Lawless
11/20/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 8:59 AM
A7 Senryu ... Unique ...
Capitano Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 4:03 AM
Compelling image.
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:17 AM
You compose these short forms so beautifully John great metaphor another gem of a poem... I have a very old cracked vase - would never let it go it holds so many memories but as a vase its absolutely useless - old age is no fun:-( hugs Jan
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