Senryu

Flawless painted face
What's behind her makeup mask
Does she even know


7/27/18
For Mick Talbot's Senryu Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written senryu!
Hicks Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Thank you.
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Hicks Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you.
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jeanne. Nicely done.
Hicks Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you.
Watson Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:01 AM
This was one of my favourites, Jeanne. A clever hidden implication!
Hicks Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Good one, Jeanne. Congrats.
Hicks Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:29 PM
I agree with Jan A good one to see on the winners' list!!!
Hicks Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, and congratulations on your first place win.
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:10 PM
good one Jeanne!:-) hugs jan xx
Hicks Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Thank you.
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