Senryu-1

Lazy crimson sways
Sun scorched earth, dry river bed
Lemonade cools all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Hello Allan Douglas Weldon, yes a lemonade drink with ice is a cooling drink on a hot humid day. Have a nice day my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Pina Colada for this Hawaiian Allan (a rarity for I've known it to be Allen with an E--glad to know late in my life), Aloha William
Weldon Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Hello William. It is nice to meet you.
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