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Senility

Through her filmy eyes, scanning the daylight hues, wary of what lies in wait around the corner or what might slip up behind a lean back. The icy freeze that racks her body down below weakened spine, causes her to search frantically for unseen glow in the faces around ; while she struggles to remember exactly where home inhabits a vision leaving the clarity of her mind. Contest Hosted by Brian Strand 6 Jan 2019

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Date: 1/7/2019 8:13:00 AM
This one crawls under the skin, excellent ink. xomo
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Date: 1/6/2019 3:55:00 PM
sublime read with a tinge of melancholia... beautifully rendered, lyva!
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Date: 1/6/2019 3:04:00 PM
Very well said. This expresses the state of the mind superbly. Best wishes for the contest. Janis
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