Senility

Through her filmy eyes, scanning the daylight hues, wary of what lies in wait around the corner or what might slip up behind a lean back. The icy freeze that racks her body down below weakened spine, causes her to search frantically for unseen glow in the faces around ; while she struggles to remember exactly where home inhabits a vision leaving the clarity of her mind. Contest Hosted by Brian Strand 6 Jan 2019
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:13 AM
This one crawls under the skin, excellent ink. xomo
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:55 PM
sublime read with a tinge of melancholia... beautifully rendered, lyva!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Very well said. This expresses the state of the mind superbly. Best wishes for the contest. Janis
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