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Sending a Unicorn To Pd

(This one's from God's POV:) Dear Unicorn, I never sent you on earth, 'Cuz I was afraid of what they'll do to you But on October 7th, I'll set you free You know why! It's PD's birthday!! Go to her, give her your charm One little visit won't do you any harm! Embrace her, love her, Oh boy! Let her cuddle like you're a soft toy Peek at her with your lovely big eyes Give her the wish of no sad 'goodbye's Give her some magic Like the one she has in her PS words Give her a hug And make the birds Sing a happy birthday song for her :) Dear unicorn, go to PD Give her all the love, Give her all the happiness, And only then return home.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 11:09:00 PM

Apoorva, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/20/2013 8:03:00 AM

A beautiful gift to one of my fave Soup poetesses. Lovely writing, Apoorva. Licia :-)

Hidden Sister

Date: 4/7/2013 9:08:00 PM

This was very cute, I hope that unicorn arrives on time. J

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/7/2013 10:32:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. She is a lady and a wonderful dedication. Terry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:13:00 PM

OO loving this poem again and again Apoorva, this is a nice and lovely tribute. Congratulations!!! God bless your blessing poem. Goodnight*LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2013 5:16:00 PM

this is adorable. I can see how it placed high. Congratulations.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/5/2013 3:42:00 PM

Congrats, apoorva, pd would have certainly enjoyed this poem:) Jag

Donna Jones

Date: 4/4/2013 9:39:00 PM

Very nice..congratulations on your win...

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/4/2013 9:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win apoorva. ~A.O

Goodness Lanre

Date: 4/4/2013 9:01:00 PM

Congrats on your great win. I Know PD would like this. Great piece...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2013 8:11:00 PM

Excellent magical poem. Thanks for entering my contest.

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2013 3:32:00 PM

fantastic.*LUV~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:39:00 PM

Apoorva, one of my dear favorite poets,,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2012 7:29:00 AM

I am sure that PD loved this one..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thansk for stopping by..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2012 2:38:00 PM

This is a lot of fun, I am sure she appreciated the poem.

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/9/2012 11:35:00 AM

Hey hey, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot .sweet write indeed!! Hugs Laila

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/16/2012 8:18:00 AM

Aww...so sweet! I liked reading this from God's point of view - very creative :) congrats on your win!

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/14/2012 3:03:00 PM

What a delightful read and I see you've won with it in a contest...congrats. Magical creatures for sharing !!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/6/2012 12:26:00 AM

Many congrats Apoorva for this wonderful win.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2012 2:45:00 PM

this is really lovely, your words are so full of enchantment...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/5/2012 11:39:00 AM

very nice poem for our friend PD. Congratulations friend Apoorva. cheers!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 7:28:00 AM

good morning Apoorva, :-)~. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2012 7:51:00 AM

Ahhhh, this is ADORABLE> I predict a high placement for THIS one.

Kash Poet

Date: 10/2/2012 9:53:00 AM

Beautiful poem here Apoorva!!