Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Send Them Back

I need to tell you something
I hope that it's ok
It really won't hurt you 
In any kind of way
just a feeling inside of me
I fight it everyday
But no matter how I fight
It just won't go away
I needed to share with you
Reasons I don't know why
Needing only to convey
In hopes that in the future
you will send them back my way

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Gershon Wolf September 19, 2019 at 1:57 PM So delicately put, Brenda. A feathery touch to your penning. :) gw Brenda Chiri September 19, 2019 at 1:59 PM Gershon thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams September 19, 2019 at 10:32 AM such a sad lonely feel to this one...hoping they send them back soon! :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 19, 2019 at 1:51 PM Well I wish I could say I hope so too but I think she is still too young to have a boyfriend!;)

Chris Green September 19, 2019 at 9:10 AM I can't tell but this feels a bit sad to me. This definitely creates thoughts in the mind. Still beautifully crafted, which goes without saying. Brenda Chiri September 19, 2019 at 9:27 AM Thank you Chris! I wrote it for Aaliya! She has a crush on this boy at school!;)