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Selfassault

Deceived her without success Read like a headline brutalized with attitude Forced to confess use on own time. First relapse Never a last, intoxicating crystal chemo blast. Cracks filled with grime, dirt of the past. Lying Useless slime parents a mold and I'm a cast A mirror of mistakes – surrounded by fakes Repeating the same actions without any success Mirror of mistakes The mold of the past The present – the cast. END November 06th 2006 about Addiction, and family dysfunction passed down.. leading to failure, and poisonous remedies that eat life away.

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Date: 11/24/2014 6:17:00 AM
As gritty, hard-hitting and pitiless as the subject matter. My only child is in and out of this insufferable place, with no mold to excuse himself. Well-written.
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Joel Thornton
Date: 11/28/2014 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Ben for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. ~Joel

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