Johnathon Souders Poet I do not know?

Self Surrounds

Lava veins while hand washing
needing a camel,
Forcing bottled water.
 
Bandanna dream feeding
warning on chem-paper
tinkering on a clip board.

Ear to conditioning air
customer complant service
Blue 80 there table number.

Bush grooming for butts
Pecking the capped
textured by stone, colored dirty.

This hunter's green is in envy
statement from "Laurel"
"Hary" sleeping.

Job-headed to tedious hair
encountering under cloths
Pathos: a beautiful world.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tiffany Lothamer February 17, 2010 at 2:41 PM I said I would be honest with you dearest, and I just don't get it. Maybe I am not intellectual enough to understand your methodology...

John Freeman February 1, 2010 at 5:38 PM Awesome thoughts put to pen Johnathon,Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM It's so good to see you posting again, Johnathon, and I must say your talent is growing with each write. This is quite a thought-provoking poem, my friend. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 19, 2010 at 6:07 AM Johnathan, I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. It was nice to know how you surround yourself! ...things you do!!! Keep writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Nick Bagnall January 19, 2010 at 5:22 AM That's a bit too sophisticated for me, I'm puzzled, I like the words, I can feel there is a flow in them, but I don't have the feintest idea what it's about (I'm still quite new at this)