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Date written: 11/27/2024

by turns, going up and down, lacking precise equilibrium; life is... but a seesaw. sometimes we rise. sometimes we fall. when you find yourself squatting on the down end, never mind the brooding gray clouds hovering overhead. do not disembark. do not count yourself out. because... come afternoon, sunshine will peak through it. you're down, though not for long! so, sit tight on that seesaw, which will inevitably rise... up, up, up! and when your feet f i n a l l y lifts off the ground, release white elephants within to the welcoming wind. shake off any encumberance on your shoulder. outstretch your arms as though you're about to fly. taste the air with your tongue. taste the newfound freedom taste life itself.

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Date: 4/27/2025 8:19:00 PM
Amazing free verse here, Edward. Belated congrats on your win with Brian
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/27/2025 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)

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