Sees Anew

A porthole in the clouds With the sun shinning through Could today be day world sees Something in clouds anew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 5:06 AM
congrats Sara on a lovely write and win my friend.. so sorry to hear of hubby's spinal surgery needed.. prayers for him and u too luv..
Merryman Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim
Nair Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Congrats on the win! Jag
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 4:27 AM
Sara congrats on your win...excellent piece..David
Rozario Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:55 AM
Congrats on your win SAra
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July 11, 2012 at 8:11 PM
Sara ~ congratulations with your awesome win~ Good night~PD
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 9:17 PM
wouldn't that be something? WE could almost expect it in the year 2012!!
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 3:03 PM
some strange formations out there lately! Thanks for stopping by. Light & Love
Sivey Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Fantastic write my friend! I thought it a great flowing art form! A good feeling poem! Awesome Work!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Nice thought there i hope you don't mind are you missing the word "the" 3rd line after be. xx
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:47 AM
interesting thought indeed - like Jesus' second coming?
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