Seen At the Aquarium

fish eye to fish eye

in love's stony embrace

two rock fish kissing




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Note: This haiku was created from 
my poem "Kissing Rocks."
I'm finding it fun to write different
forms for the same poem, with
small word changes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:34 PM
aww that is a cool image ;-)
Gifford Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:13 PM
So happy you enjoyed it!````Darlene
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:17 AM
I really like your style, you're creative and innovative in your subject matter. Emile.
Gifford Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Thank you, Emile, your gracious comments overwhelm me. ~~Darlene
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 4:50 AM
aww cute:-) hugs Jan xx
Gifford Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 4:46 PM
Thanks, Jan, yes, what the aquarium offers is full of poem possibilities. Blessings, Darlene
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